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[Marvel Villains Assemble]

Great

"You look like a hemophiliac attempt at growing a scab"

Best line

Good Job

[The Green Flea]

sorry, not good. Read the review for ideas.

Ok, I will write up a good review. I think you guys have potential, to be dedicated enough to actualy fallow through and make the cartoon says alot. However, the cartoon itself needs alot of work.
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Over all, your about 40 years too late. This kind of cartoon was popular in 1965, things like Bird Man and Space Ghost and Johnny quest. Those cartoons are only shown now on stations like Cartoon network's "Boomerang" because kids today arn't interested at all.
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The animation was slow and jerky, use more motion tweens and less frame by frame. the animation of an arm moving from down to up should have 10 frames, not 3.
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The lip syncing was painful to watch. I know is a pain in the neck to animate, but you really need to just go in there frame by frame listening to the audio and use the apropreate mouth to fit the sound.
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You need more realistic charecter movement. They should blink and move a bit when they talk (not just stretch their head up and down).
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The animation was way way way too slow over all. No one wants to watch slow slow zooms or the word "staring" in the credits for 5 seconds, or the guy walk towards the screen for a full 15 seconds
There was no danger. No drama. no suspence. The hero was never in any danger of losing and they bad guy put up no fight whatsoever.
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Also, there was no comedy at all. The "looks like your first class flight has been downgraded to coach" was just dumb and unfunny.
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You need to look at popular cartoons of today for ideas on a sucsessfull cartoon, not stuff from the 60's

[Star Worms]

Pretty good.

I think the physics could have been better, the way the weapons arc went pright and that thre me off. I also thought it could have been a bit more true to the actual game play, as well as maybe true to the star wars script, but I think its a big improvement over your last one.

Keep up the worms spoofs. its amazing how fun it is just to watch.

And like I said last time, MAKE THIS INTO A GAME! or get some one else to. Maybe just have them make regular worms and customize the costumes and weapons for each parody.

Good Job. 5/5

[Circuit Skirmish]

off sync

Yea, sorry but it was off sync for me, changing wuality didnt help. Looked good though.

[Halo Armageddon]

Awsome

Very very good recreation of Worms Armageddon, so much so that I'm genna re-dowload it right now, I haven't played in a long time. Great job 5/5

[Star Warz - thingie.]

Your the man now dog

Good for a few chuckles.

[Paradise Lost]

um

"seems many of you seem to think im going to make a series of this, which sadly, isnt the plan for right now."

Well guess what. You need to make it your plan cuz thats awsome. screw the book! lol.

[Zip Chord / invincibility]

"There was no tweening used in the animation"

"There was no tweening used in the animation of this flash."
You say that like its a bad thing. I dont understand why people are against tweening. I look at your movie and see a great flash, but I see so many places where tween ing could have been used without it looking any different at all and it would have save you who knows how much time.